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I felt like writing something having to do with genderbending, so my friend :iconiarthunted: gave me a prompt. Her prompt said "Guy has cheated on a girl, thinking he would get away with it. his girlfriend (or boyfriend) finds out and turns him as revenge. Maybe in a potion hidden in a meal/drink."

So based on that I wrote this short thing, hopefully people enjoy it at least a bit.
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

...The opening, even in a few words, sets a background for the reader, which is very useful. The set-up is well-delivered, offering a mystery/suspense moment--the "Who done it?"--to expand the scene further. The description of the change is well written & very detailed--adding the awkward moment at the end is an added bonus!
...A number of questions come to mind right away:
1= How many times has he done this?
2= Who would have the means to carry this out?
3= Was this an isolated case, or does the perpetrator have a hidden history of punishing the unfaithful?

...Looking forward to seeing more such work! Keep it up. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>