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IGirl - TG
A ripple spread beneath my clothing, my stomach caving inwards in a sudden burst of pain. The pill bottle falls besides me, rolling across the ground, and I scrabble for it; my dark little secret, the thing nobody can be allowed to know I took.
Another stream of pain shoots through my arms, the bones crushing inwards. The flesh feels like it's peeling off my body in some places, and being welded against my bones in others. I can feel my sides working in, my face changing. I sneeze repeatedly as my nose grows smaller, and my lips grow plumper, my ears changing too. Hair grows over them, sliding down my backside as it arcs in pain, my growing
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An Original Transformation - Part 2
An Original Transformation - Part 2
Part 2
The lunch group receded, splintering into their own factions which we sometimes visited. We kept constant to one another. At times, high school had all the desolation of an arctic tundra with a feral wind gnashing across wilderness. Days came and went with new confusions and stresses like needle pricks till we could only lay our heads down next to one another and rub our eyes.
The years passed as steady as breath. We looked back on each day with a grimace for the silly things but with the snicker of distance.
My parents regarded this all without suspicion and often praised me for cultivating a gi
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The Costume
The Costume
Welcome to the Costume Emporium! the man behind the counter said to two teenagers, We have a special deal this week since Halloween is approaching! If you buy one head piece, wig, or mask, youll get the second one half off!
See? Jenny said as she poked Greg in the shoulder, I told you! Theyre having an awesome sale here at the store! We so have to buy from here for our costumes this year!
Alright, Greg said to her, Well get something here. You know, Ive never been here before to get
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I felt like writing something having to do with genderbending, so my friend gave me a prompt. Her prompt said "Guy has cheated on a girl, thinking he would get away with it. his girlfriend (or boyfriend) finds out and turns him as revenge. Maybe in a potion hidden in a meal/drink."
So based on that I wrote this short thing, hopefully people enjoy it at least a bit.
So based on that I wrote this short thing, hopefully people enjoy it at least a bit.
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...The opening, even in a few words, sets a background for the reader, which is very useful. The set-up is well-delivered, offering a mystery/suspense moment--the "Who done it?"--to expand the scene further. The description of the change is well written & very detailed--adding the awkward moment at the end is an added bonus!
...A number of questions come to mind right away:
1= How many times has he done this?
2= Who would have the means to carry this out?
3= Was this an isolated case, or does the perpetrator have a hidden history of punishing the unfaithful?
...Looking forward to seeing more such work! Keep it up. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>